Two Versions of a Cinquain for the First Day of Spring

1
Warm, wet,
the spring wind gets
in everywhere—stirring
curtains, tugging and loosening
clothing

2
Stirring
curtains, tugging
and loosening clothing,
the spring wind gets in everywhere,
warm, wet

About John MacKenzie

I'll mumble for ya. Poetry, plus most things quantifiable: science, neuroscience, memory, epistemology, baseball. And so on.
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